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The history of the place i was born

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  • 2016-11-05
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I was born in Suwon Korea.

When i was very young i did't know about Suwon's history.

But when i got in to elementary school at grade 2 i left to Australia.

So i learned the history of Australia.

So when i came bace to Korea my mother tought me some of history.

 

King Jeong Jo was the 22nd king of the Joseon Dynasty of Korea.

He was a amazimg king.

He also had a lot of great ideas for the he's peoples so the peoples loved him.

Actually Jeong Jo lived in Seoul but wanted to make an amazing contry.

So he made a new contry called Suwon.

He made big houses where a king can live.

He made a Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.

He also made a man made lake.

Because of Jeong Jo's amazing ideas and hard works Suwon has become in to a wonderfull city.

And the peoples now thinks that Jeong Jo is the greatest king.

 

~bye~​

~^o^~