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Re : The history of the place i was born

  • April Sacpa
  • 2016-11-07
  • 1320


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I was born in Suwon Korea.

When I was very young I didn't know about Suwon's history.

But when I got  to elementary school in grade 2 I left for Australia.

So I learned the history of Australia.

So when I came back to Korea my mother taught me some of history.

 

King Jeong Jo was the 22nd king of the Joseon Dynasty of Korea.

He was an amazing king.

He also had a lot of great ideas for his people so the people loved him.

Actually Jeong Jo lived in Seoul but wanted to make an amazing country.

So he made a new country called Suwon.

He made big houses where a king can live.

He made a Suwon Hwaseong Fortress.

He also made a man made lake.

Because of Jeong Jo's amazing ideas and hard works Suwon has become into a wonderful city.

And the people now thinks that Jeong Jo was the greatest king.

 

~bye~​

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