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James and the giant peach

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  • 2018-08-15
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This is story about James Henry Trotter’s adventure. When James was four years old, his parents were dead. So he lived with his aunts, Sponge and Spiker. They always put him to works. One day, James was crying, an old man emerged from the bushes. He gave green things in the paper bag that had a magic power. But James fell on the ground and the paper bag burst. He tried to pick them up but they were sinking into the soil. Because of this, a peach tree that was at the aunt Sponge and aunt Spiker’s garden had a very, very huge peach. At that night, James went into the peach and met an old green grasshopper, an enormous Spider, a giant Ladybug, a Glow-Worm, a Silkworm, a Centipede and an Earthworm. They leave the aunts’ house by riding the giant peach. They fell to the sea, and were attacked by sharks. But they used James’s brilliant idea, they could escape the danger. Also they fought with Cloud-men because a Centipede peeved them. After they escaped from Cloud-men, they arrived in New York. They became celebrities. They got a job, or married someone. James lived in the enormous peach stone. All of them lived happily ever after.

I think this story is very interesting. The big bugs, and the big peach! I think the most interesting part is that they catched seagulls and flied above the sea. It’s amazing. I want to ride a giant peach, too. It brings on nausea a little but it's okay. But I don’t want to meet enormous insects. I don’t like insects because they are gross.

I think the part that the giant peach spiked upon the pinnacle of the Empire State Building is interesting, too. It is dangerous but I think it is fun. So if I have a chance that I can ride a giant peach, I want to do that. Umm..Is it a harm to people?

When I was young, I want to fly. And I thought if I can be small, I want to hide into a fruit. Well, in this story, the peach became giant.

In this story, it has my childhood dream. So I like this book. Instead of me, James achieved my dream.

And I like peaches so I want to eat a giant peach. I think it is very delicious. It is big, so I can’t eat all of it. I want to eat it with James.

I want to read some books of Roald Dahl. It is interesting and fun.

 

  • Jessa2018-08-18 23:04:55

    This story is about James Henry Trotter’s adventure. When James was four years old, his parents passed away so he lived with his aunts, Sponge and Spiker. They always put him to work. One day, James was crying, an old man emerged from the bushes. He gave green things in the paper bag that had a magic power. But James fell on the ground and the paper bag burst. He tried to pick them up but they were sinking into the soil. Because of this, a peach tree that was at aunt Sponge and aunt Spiker’s garden had a very huge peach. That evening, James went into the peach and met an old green grasshopper, an enormous Spider, a giant Ladybug, a Glow-Worm, a Silkworm, a Centipede and an Earthworm. They left the aunts’ house by riding the giant peach. They fell to the sea, and were attacked by sharks. But they used James’s brilliant idea, so they escaped the danger. They also fought with Cloud-men because a Centipede peeved them. After they escaped from Cloud-men, they arrived in New York. They became celebrities. They got a job, or married someone. James lived in the enormous peach stone. All of them lived happily ever after.

    I think this story is very interesting. The big bugs, and the big peach! I think the most interesting part is that they catched seagulls and flied above the sea. It’s amazing. I want to ride a giant peach, too. It brings on nausea a little but it's okay. But I don’t want to meet enormous insects. I don’t like insects because they are gross.

    I think the part that the giant peach spiked upon the pinnacle of the Empire State Building is interesting, too. It is dangerous but I think it is fun. So if I have a chance that I can ride a giant peach, I want to do that. Umm..Is it a harm to people?

    When I was young, I want to fly. And I thought if I can be small, I want to hide into a fruit. Well, in this story, the peach became giant.

    In this story, it has my childhood dream. So I like this book. Instead of me, James achieved my dream.

    And I like peaches so I want to eat a giant peach. I think it is very delicious. It is big, so I can’t eat all of it. I want to eat it with James.

    I want to read some books of Roald Dahl. It is interesting and fun.