?Today my friend invited me to come over to her house. I met her this year and she's already my best friend. She is really nice and smart but she's sometimes annoying. Well, I don't really care because I know that friends can sometimes fight and be nice to each other the next day. Typical friendship xD. That's what happens to me. But that doesn't mean everyday, I meant rarely happens to me :) Today at my friend's house I ate a huge amount of icecream. More than I expected. It was a special day for me that's why. I haven't been outside for ages since it's the holidays here. I like staying at home better because there's like airconditioner everywhere I go. The toilet is cool as well! Now that's suprising me. Anyway this is what happened today and see you later guys !! ?
From teacher April Sacpa
Today my friend invited me to come over to her house. I met her this year and she's already my best friend. She is really nice and smart but she's sometimes annoying. Well, I don't really care because I know that friends can sometimes fight and be nice to each other the next day. Typical friendship xD. That's what happens to me. But that doesn't mean everyday, I meant rarely happens to me :) Today at my friend's house I ate a huge amount of icecream. More than I expected. It was a special day for me that's why. I haven't been outside for ages since it's the holidays here. I like staying at home better because there's like airconditioner everywhere I go. The toilet is cool as well! Now that's suprising me. Anyway this is what happened today and see you later guys !!
Corrected version:
Today my friend invited me to come over to her house. I met her this year and she's already my best friend. She is really nice and smart but she's sometimes annoying. Well, I don't really care because I know that friends can sometimes fight and be nice to each other the next day. Typical friendship xD. That's what happens to me. But that doesn't mean every day, I meant rarely happens to me :) Today at my friend's house I ate a huge amount of ice cream. More than I expected. It was a special day for me that's why. I haven't been outside for ages since it's the holidays here. I like staying at home better because there's like air conditioner everywhere I go. The toilet is cool as well! Now that's surprising me. Anyway this is what happened today and see you later guys!!
Katherine, what you wrote is good however you need to be very careful with your spelling and spacing. Great job!